Racism

[الأنسه بكلويز]

This is the most amazing poem i've read about racism....
after you read it please i'd like to hear your opinions

When I born, I Black
When I grow up, I Black
When I go in Sun, I Black
When I scared, I Black
When I sick, I Black
And when I die, I still black

And you White fella
When you born, you Pink
When you grow up, you White
When you go in Sun, you Red
When you cold, you Blue
When you scared, you Yellow
When you sick, you Green
And when you die, you Gray

And you calling me Colored ?

by the way !!! it was written by a kid

[حنـــــان]

Oh, no wonder there are repetitive comprehensive mistakes, as it has been written by a child

If you don't mind baklaweez, I'm gonna make the proper adjustments because it simply drives me crazy seeing so many mistakes.... and its good practice for that child anyway


When I am born, I am black
When I grow up, I am black
When I go into the Sun, I am black
When I am scared, I am black
When I am sick, I am black
And when I die, I am black

And you White fella
When you are born, you are pink
When you grow up, you are white
When you go into the Sun, you are red
When you are cold, you are blue
When you are scared, you are yellow
When you are sick, you are green
And when you die, you are gray

?And you are calling me colored

!!I really liked this baklaweez... it makes sense

Thanks for the poem

[الأنسه بكلويز]

hi Hanan,

thanks for your comments and passing by...
actually i don't know that black child who wrote it so that i could give him the correction... i just took it from a fun site...
but thanks anyway.

[شعاع من نور]

Peace be upon u....miss Baklaweez
what a nice poem, i really liked it.....and no wonder that the writer was a child from the innocence of the words and mistakes at the same time....
u know... it reminded me with another poem wrote by a Lebanese
poet , i guess he was Motran Khalil Motran or Gobran , i don't remember
correctly..... but a part of the poem was

نسى الطين ساعة أنه طين حقير::فصال تيهاً و عربدا
و كسى الخز جسمه فتباهى::و حوى المال كيسه فتمردا
يا أخي لا تشح بوجهك عني:: ما أنا فحمة و لا أنت فرقدا

thanx sweetie

[ابن البلد]

Thanxxxx Baklawyyyyyz
I read it b4 ;)